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A recent poem, the result of the dumpster fire that is currently the news and a memory of a bully with a magnifying glass on a hot summer day:

It’s so easy, yes

to break things. 

Careless cruelties

Narrowed to a single focus

of concentrated power.

One ant crushed, one sneer revealed, one push over the edge…

But one and one and one divides into two

and regret comes all too soon.

I also thought it might be interesting to show my work. Here’s what a typical poem draft looks like for me. The indented lines are the alternatives tested as I wrote my way through.

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